Ratatosk Writings - Poetry Review Forum

I really enjoyed this prose - which read almost as a beseaching prayer for answers. I did though find reading it in one block quite difficult.

I reacted and responded to the desperation in your voice - and need for answers to the questions. These would have made ideal points for you to have broken the piece into stanzas. The lack of punctuation made it quite difficult to read allowed.

All the above said though, I did enjoy reading it - and thank you for sharing.

Best wishes Shani



Shani Phethean-Hubble