When looking over a lengthy collaborative project, I found "slightly" and "somewhat" almost every paragraph, but after three years I can't tell if they're my pet words or hers. I do know that I use too many "have," "had," and "has beens" I didn't realize this until I read the suggestion in a review. Then I went over my work and needed to agree. I'm already working on that.
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I do know that I use too many "have," "had," and "has beens" I didn't realize this until I read the suggestion in a review. Then I went over my work and needed to agree. I'm already working on that.
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