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Clearly set out on the page, with a good backstory, easily engaged with by the reader. I particularly enjoyed the way the verse was interwoven and concluded by repetition. It scanned well on the page, as well as working when read aloud. I really enjoyed it, and the neat simple conclusion, really framed it well... Well done and thank you for sharing. Shani Phethean-Hubble Visit My Web Page for Writing Hints, Links and Poetry Review Forum
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