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The High Priest of Aetira is hunting down the young Galena Firestorm. His reason: to use her to aquire the key to the most powerful weapon ever known. But when Galena meets the priest Yairin and his bodyguard Derendar, things start moving a little faster.

Running from one danger to another, with the rulers of nations searching everywhere for her, will the chance encounter be enough to save Galena? What is this weapon every desires? Who is the mysterious Katar? Not knowing the answers is dangerous. Knowing the answers could be fatal...

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