Erotica Harem

Thank you so much, Carol. That first part...I was happy with it. Now I'm not. I made some changes, just mainly words in order to "show," but this is "telling" to the reader why she's there instead of dumping her into the nightclub and having the reader trying to figure it out. Sheesh, nothing is ever easy.

This was a great review, Carol. I can't thank you enough. And your words of encouragement touched my heart. Thank you for that too.

Well, I'm off to revise, which I'll be doing all week to get this baby ready for submission. Every time I think about it, or write it, my guts clench. Hey, I won't know unless I try, right?

Thank you again and again.

Hugs,
Dusk