Erotica Harem

Aha. If that is your meaning in that sentence, then no. No apostrophe is required. That's just nitpicks on my part. It's fine.

Yeah, w/c automatically filtered swear words in some cases. *shrugs* It startled me the first time I saw it. But if you're set to view as an 18 or over reader, they'll come through to you when you view the item in its home base. They showed when I read them. Sheesh, makes me feel so dirty now. *washes out mouth with soap, gets confused, washes out eyes too* Now, if only I could wash out my brain...

I go different ways on settings. I saw the bar and the round table of annoying men. I saw his bedroom with mirrors and a hot redhead. The thing is this, you're writing from his POV, would he notice much more? He is a man after all. *covers the Sultan's eyes* In my opinion, men don't notice many details. To make that a non-man bashing comment, I think your character notices what he should.

As far as comedy in erotica, why the Hell not? Heh. Sex is funny, admit it. So is vanity. I did line edits on an erotica novella a couple days ago about angels and Fates and myths and OMG that author had the puns and comedy down. She wrote with an almost gangtser type voice that had me giggling bad in the fight scenes and the bedroom scenes, but it was still sensual. Go figure. My stuff feels too dark to me. It may be that it's just my stuff and I see it in a different way than readers.

Ok, I'm blabbering. It's my sneaky way of procrastinating. I have to get on over to a Greek Easter party, complete with a whole goat on a spit a roastin'. *sigh* Honestly, I'd rather hide here in my cave and write all day and night. That's just not very sociable though... Have to set a good example for the wees.

Good luck with reviewing!

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