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Apr 11, 2007 at 6:14pm
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Re: Re: Re: Re: Review Night Master (Part 1 Sin) Carol
well crap :( ... I need to re-write Greg's character and make him arrogant becauseI made Gideon the arrogant character thinking Val would come calling on him as opposed to Greg... and punish him for his arrogance...I didn't think of him as Val... Tell me what to do....or maybe you want to read all of it and then tell me what to do.




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Review Night Master (Part 1 Sin) Carol · 04-11-07 1:04pm
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Re: Re: Re: Review Night Master (Part 1 Sin) Carol · 04-11-07 6:08pm
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Re: Re: Review Night Master (Part 1 Sin) Carol · 04-11-07 7:38pm
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