Erotica Harem

That's a great spin to it. I will confess, my heart stopped when I read this. Val, of course, is the devil's son, so he would be powerful enough to snap a demigod from his realm, wouldn't he? And this adds a little more twist to the story, because the readers might assume you're going after Greg.

And as I haven't read all of it, I will keep my comments to this until I do.

Dusk