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Apr 12, 2007 at 7:38pm
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Edited: April 12, 2007 at 7:39pm
Re: Re: Review Night Master (Full Version - Sin) Carol
"I might suggest sharing this with the reader, either when Gideon first visits Greg, or when he’s talking to Ivory."

I believe he did think that to himself that he was gay. Without looking at the manuscript I believe he thought it when he described Ivory. They were in the kitchen .... I don't remember what I wrote, but he said something to the effect..."If I liked women for sex partners, I'd like my house mate Ivory....or something like that. I'll make sure it's more pronouced though, if you didn't catch it.



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