Erotica Harem

I found two lines: If he liked women as lovers, perhaps he'd find Ivory attractive. - and -. He too, felt the same way about getting a permanent, live-in male counterpart. This second part could be construed both ways though.

I must have read over it when I was making suggestions (sorry). You go right into describing Ivory, and I guess my mind was there, trying to picture her.

Sorry, Carol. Would this be better to add when Gideon visits him in the bedroom (i.e., the wind-touch of Gideon's fingers were better than any man he'd had before...or something like that)?

The story you've created is great, and intriguing, Carol. I love the demigod and the interaction with Greg.

D.