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I'm a stickler for characters. I'll review your fiction. That's all.
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Apr 16, 2007 at 1:00pm
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Well...Its a start...
hey buddy, cheers for the forum...

this is my first draft of my first chapter i would love you to have a look at it and let me know what you think, it is not really that in-depth with character orientation yet, but that is the style of mystery that i am hoping to acheive...anyways hope you enjoy and look forward to hearing back from you...

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Well...Its a start... · 04-16-07 1:00pm
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