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Aug 23, 2007 at 5:33am
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Edited: August 23, 2007 at 11:55am
Re: Review: Vampiric Seduction Ch 1 by Carol
Thanks for your comments. Sorry to have confused you. LOL

Okay...let's see....This was a transitory chapter about time travel and I preferred not get grounded here...it is sort of an introductory chapter to get readers in the mood for time travel.... and since they are in the process of leaving this place somewhere in New England and going to somewhere else in the past, I didn't want readers to get too interested in it by dumping in a lot of setting details. I wanted the relationship to be important...the blood brotherhood so to speak...I am not for dumping very many details right off the bat.

I did however simplify the end of this chapter by taking out a couple of paragraphs.



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