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Dec 5, 2007 at 6:13am
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Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: new character


No that's still to come. Here's the plan Flex and I came up with but we were going to keep it secret til it became obvious and what not.

Dylan is paranoid about Rory but hs mind has been put at ease for the time being but he's still worried. I'm guessing your characters would be too.

Rory is getting pissed off at Dylan because he's being overbearing and what not/ over protective.

The mother wants Rory to come home with her so she can have specialist councelling sessions under the privacy of the family home.

Rory is getting pissed off at her mother. So is Dylan.

(Now edited due to Nao's entrance, the following)

Dylan gets paranoid about Nao who will eventually join the crew.

Rory notices Dylan's added paranoia.

Rory goes a little haywire, seems to display more and more characteristics that suggest she tried to kill herself or would again try to kill herself.

General unhappiness.

BIG ARGUEMENT between cousins. And the truth comes out about Dylan. Paranoia about Rory lifts and....

....then we're going to need a HUGE new plot twist, preferably which will include either Loki, Kano, Ella, Liz, Isaac or Lee, in order to keep it going.

*grins*

I figure that based on university term times this would all happen by the beginning of the christmas holidays?

???
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