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FOR THE BOARDS: Our House, Chapter 10
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This is a tricky chapter. It's critical to the plot, and it has high emotional content. I'm not sure Chad's reaction at the end rings true. I'm also worried that I might have telegraphed too much of the plot. I'd like you tell me what you think the significance of the revelation of this chapter might have on the plot -- just to help me figure out if I'm being too obvious.

Of course, all other comments are welcome!!!

Bill, the MathGuy

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FOR THE BOARDS: Our House, Chapter 10 · 01-14-08 7:57pm
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Re: FOR THE BOARDS: Our House, Chapter 10 · 01-15-08 3:15am
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