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Jan 15, 2008 at 3:18am
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Re: Re: Review: Man and His Dog, ch. 4, Mathguy
No prob, actually, I noticed the passive voice and then clunked over the rest. Glad it helped. In fact, when you spot those in my stuff, I'd aprpeciate it too.

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