Thank you so much for your review. In the beginning there is only one POV, Charlene. But as the chapter go on, there will be two POV; Charlene and Angie.
I am not sure if I will change that in the future...reviewing work isnt my strongest point at the moment lol...
as for this comment:
“Open your hands,” Angie said before she poured the candy. Charlene tasted one. It tasted like the chocolate chips on her cookies. Smarties have chocolate in them?
Yes they do. Smarties are like m&m but better...there are all kinds of colors and filled with chocolate...very yummy...every kid I know LOVE EM lol...hope this clears your question...
one thing I need to say...for me it is hard to notice your corrections, I dont know if it is because of the color...but sometimes I can barely catch the correction...just thought you should know...
peace
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