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Jan 27, 2008 at 4:41am
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I dare
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I am looking for a very honest and indepth review. Grammar so far can be overlooked, because this is not perfected. I am looking for critique directed towards characters, atmosphere and technique and the ending. I think I have gone wrong with this story and well I want to revise and polish and do what it takes to get published.

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I dare · 01-27-08 4:41am
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Re: I dare · 03-12-08 6:41pm
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