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Mar 8, 2008 at 7:12pm
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Something I wrote rather quickly
by Sariah Author IconMail Icon
I wrote this poem for my nephew and his new love. It's not quite the way I want it but I can't tell what's wrong with it. Would really appreciate an honest and detailed review before I give it to him.
 Spring Love Open in new Window. (E)
For my nephew and his new love, I can only hope I do them justice.
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Something I wrote rather quickly · 03-08-08 7:12pm
by Sariah Author IconMail Icon

The following applies to this forum item as a whole, not this post. Feedback sent here will go to the forum's owner, IsA: SEEKING UPGRADE - Please!.
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