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Mar 10, 2008 at 3:34pm
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Review Please: a Sonnet
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It's an entry for a poetry contest, as stated in the summary. I'd need as much feedback as possible not to edit this one, but as a means to learn more before the next time I decide I want to write a poem.

Just tear it apart if you must.

Bellatrix

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I stand in the distance
I view from afar
Should I offer some assistance?
Should it matter who you are?

Confide in Me, Kylie Minogue

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Review Please: a Sonnet · 03-10-08 3:34pm
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Re: Review Please: a Sonnet · 03-10-08 4:04pm
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