Erotica Harem

i know what you mean. when i started my newest story, i ended up writing twenty pages in the first day. a four hour day! talk about progress. i wish all days were like that. i could finish a book a month. i was planning to finish the rest of the chapters listed but i decided to wait until you've actually had time to use the other reviews before bombing you with another one. HOpe my reivews are helpful. Everything is ceratainly my opinion and i'll undertand if you don't want to use any of the corrections i listed although there weren't that many at all. you did a good job.:)