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Apr 4, 2008 at 12:43pm
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Please review #1403970
Folks, this piece is resubmitted with changes to the writing but NOT the plot. First time around, a year ago, I am not sure anyone got the ironic conclusion. Now resubmitted with a brief comment at the start.

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Please review #1403970 · 04-04-08 12:43pm
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