Erotica Harem

Thank you alot Max, I appreciate your comments. Actually, he's not going back to kill his grandfather and I am not into sci fi at all...Vampiric Seduction is more of an erotic-romance story than it is sci fi and I don't think my readers are into the scientific quantam theories of time and space. If a readers really wanted to get in to what can and can't be, there is really no time travel.

Most of the readers are more into the sex part than the sci fi part. Regarding how things got in the room, and why they're there, I'm not really wanting to get the story bogged down in the scientific details of the hows and whys each of the props got there. Not sure my little niche cares about their origins. I realized you're a strong sci fi man and I could never write for that group. lol

I'll check out the line by line. I appreciate the long comment at the beginning. Not sure what it meant, but thanks a lot, Max.