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Apr 13, 2008 at 3:45pm
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Re: REVIEW: Untitled M/M story, Chapter 2, by Pat
Thanks, Bill and steal whatever you like. So, the dialogue didn't suck? *grisn* I hate writing dialogue. You know how many times I had to rewrite the dialogue in Affairs before I didn't cringe? *grins* I hope its getting better. I'll doublecheck that copyright thing--but the more I think about it the more I think, you're right but it should only take a word or two to fix it, or SCott doesn't know either since he's never used real people as models. Or I could make it that way.

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