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Rated: 18+ · Message Forum · Fantasy · #1339130
For the campfire, "Waylon's Crossing"
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May 6, 2008 at 3:47pm
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Edited: May 6, 2008 at 3:48pm
Re: Gathering
by Andante Author IconMail Icon
Well... he can find out from Sybren where Rell went, and if he goes toward that pub to track the man down, he may hear some people talking on the street outside the pub about a cheetah, vampire, a couple dead bodies, and a fight. ;)

So... if I'm understanding the order right, Alber's up next for that scene, then Helena again, then Sybra, then Rell again? If that's the case, perhaps your addition can bring you to the door of the pub, or, if everyone else is willing, you can also describe the scene that follows (2 dead bodies, Helena half-mad and trying to get past a cheetah to eat Rell, who is burned a bit and tied to a chair in the corner, Alber coming and "quelling" her hehe).

Heh, it'd be funny if Zombie showed up, too. :P
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