Poetry Exercises for Daily Practice

..Lin,
I sent this same message to you directly so I could rate it. Here it is here so others can see that I read yours.

I wondered about the line about foundation but the more I read it, it is actually very profound. It's as if you are saying we women are able to wake up to a new day, cover our storms with foundation and go out in the world again a new person. The putting on of a "new face" mixed with the covering up of mistakes from before allow us to to meet each day with a fresh start.

I think you got the spirit of what that format was looking for and I personally do not really care about form as long as you convey your message. i love it when you have to read it a few times in confusion and then, BANG, you get it. Or rather, you get what you think is the message. It's okay that three people may get three different messages out of this but, well, this was mine. I liked it very much. Thank you for trying it out.

Great job,
SWPoet

PS, feel free to read others here and give your impressions. I would like some interaction between people taking part.






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