...I'm not ignoring the story, I'm just being a summer camp counselor for two months. One month down, one to go, complete without internet access (I'm leaving tomorrow, just finishing the one-day break we get between sessions).
If the CF author doesn't skip me, please don't think I'm being indifferent! Chances are I'm running after little kids and making sure they eat/bathe/don't get lost.
Anyway.... just to put it out there, I was noticing a general structure of things, where individual characters meet with individual challenges. Perhaps such challenges, as set forth by James, could start to culminate in endeavors experienced by all characters at once in the future? I would really love to write for more interaction in the crazy action parts between all the characters. Teamwork, etc.
Anyway, I look forward to writing again after another four weeks. Take care!
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