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Re: Review: Mists of His Mind, Ch 12 by Max Griffin
Tim -- many thanks. I agree the earlier pacing is...uh...glacial. I'm not quite sure what to do about it, as I also think I need everything that happens earlier. The only thing I can think of is to add more stuff, to add some tension.

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