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Sep 8, 2008 at 9:48pm
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Review: Seven Days, chapter 6 by Max
Title: Seven Days

Chapter: 6

Author: Max Griffin 🏳️‍🌈 Author IconMail Icon

Plot: Short chapter, but the boys have made it to safety.

Setting: Not much here. I'm wondering if this is a partial installment in the story.

Characters: Sheriff, tells of a discovered body. Says no military base exists in the mountain side. Fred-finds an inner strength as he lets his love and determination lead him and Dave to freedom.

Referencing: Everything was good here.

Grammar: Nothing to point out.

General: Well, I've already said it's a short chapter. Let me know if I've missed something, or when you get the rest of it posted. I would be willing to give it another review.

Line Edits: nothing to point out.

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