Plot: Short chapter, but the boys have made it to safety.
Setting: Not much here. I'm wondering if this is a partial installment in the story.
Characters: Sheriff, tells of a discovered body. Says no military base exists in the mountain side. Fred-finds an inner strength as he lets his love and determination lead him and Dave to freedom.
Referencing: Everything was good here.
Grammar: Nothing to point out.
General: Well, I've already said it's a short chapter. Let me know if I've missed something, or when you get the rest of it posted. I would be willing to give it another review.
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