ooh! I got goosebumps reading this I could practically hear her voice. Not only does your character's initial flirty manner help create an intimate portrait of her in the setting, but the witty, quickfire, banter and no nonsense attitude comes across brilliantly in her short, to the point, clipped, responses. If you do ever get to give her life in dialogue, you should try to recreate her speech style just like this. It works so well!
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I could practically hear her voice. Not only does your character's initial flirty manner help create an intimate portrait of her in the setting, but the witty, quickfire, banter and no nonsense attitude comes across brilliantly in her short, to the point, clipped, responses. If you do ever get to give her life in dialogue, you should try to recreate her speech style just like this. It works so well!
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