Don't be shy, ADD A CHAPTER forum

I took a look at Drinzar, with every intention of adding to it, but it was way too complicated for me. There were so many characters and places (all with bizarre names) to keep track of that I couldn't even decide where to begin. That and there weren't any explanations. What is an elf in this story? What's a troll? Why are they fighting? If you could make the story a lot simpler and easier to pick up, I'd definitely be willing to give it a another chance!