Erotica Harem

Wow, Jon. Three chapters in a row! I'm so glad you are enjoying this story. Your suggestions are all right on, I'll be revising chapters soon. I want to add at least one more chapter today so I can stay on the board. I removed the reason that Sean went into the attic storeroom in an earlier chapter because I didn't like it, but I did mean to put it back in chapter 3. I needed to work on it a bit. Make his reason a bit more clear.

Oh, and the mysterious man will soon have some description. I didn't want to try to have Aran see too much of him when they first meet on the side of the road, because it's dark. I could just add a tidbit in there, maybe Aran can catch just a glimpse of his hair or eyes. She's on a country road, with no lights, no flashlight...

*sigh* What we authors go through, you know? Is this right? Should I write that? Wait, I could do it this way...or that way...or no...

So many ideas, so little time.

Huggers,
Dragon