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Oh my gosh, do I ever know what you mean, hun. That's why I think this group is so wonderful; to keep us straight because we're writers and we're looking for items like this to point out as our goal is to ensure the reader has a pleasant, enjoyable experience.

I absolutely love how you've captured Aran - she's so fragile and I just want to take her and hold her; make everything better. I love how you've captured Sean - he's such a good-hearted man; wonderful, Cassi, just wonderful.

I really think you have a hit here!

As far as not saying too much about the Selkie (mysterious man) thus far, it's fine. I was pointing it out mainly to remind you to do so soon as readers will get anxious; yes, I think it would be fantastic if Aran could catch a glimpse of the man's eyes or some other trait that will then nag her for a while as she tries to remember "why" she feels like she knows the man, or has met him before, etc....you could really spin this wonderfully; but then, you're writing the story - so, I'll slink back to my corner. Can't wait for more chapters. I started one this morning and couldn't stop; hehe~!

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