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Jun 8, 2010 at 2:54pm
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Re: review: Selkie Tears, Chap 4 by Dragon
David,

Thanks for the reviews. In chapter 4 where Aran starts walking home I had in mind that the village is very small, one main road coming in and going out. And the only place Aran would head for would be home and there is only one direction home where they're at. I'll have to take this point into consideration.

I'm glad you're reading this and will continue. Her illness won't get too much worse. There is an episode where Sean thinks she's slit her wrists, but she didn't do it. I can't give mroe detail than that and I hope it won't be too dramatic for your read. After that, Aran will begin to go uphill.

Thanks again!

Dragon
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review: Selkie Tears, Chap 4 by Dragon · 06-07-10 8:28pm
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