im feeling 3rd more than 1st, but my friends said that the start of my novel, Black Magic, was crap.
I have plot and character development issues with 3rd, but Sophie herself, is a really strong charater already. I fell that she will be unrealateable in the sence that shes so f****d up but she wants wat any teenaged girl wants. So i guess, the answer would be 3rd. Ill give it a go and see what happens.
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