Nancy's Poetry Review Forum

Hi Nancy,

I'm glad to have found a poetry review forum.
First of all, I'm not a poet, but inspiration calls for poetry sometimes, like when I wrote this four line poem:

A Writer's Truth  (E) A spark of inspiration, mindful of meter and rhyme. A writer's truth, told in little time. #1796927 by 4thPseudonym

So I guess what I'm after is: what does those four lines say to the reader? I thought it lacked imagery, but then again I suppose that's subjective. The first two lines might actually be redundant, but then again they helped build the painting. So, as you can see, though I quite liked how it turned out, I need some great advice to tell me what I actually came up with. Thanks.

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Spectre, the Fourth Pseudonym.