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Freeing our heart,cleaning our soul.no deprivation to self-cleansing.we've been selfish. we should know our own past,before it becomes our life. so here it is.forgive us of our trespasses, sounds familiar, oh so clear and vivid our past will come to us in our dreams.re-incarnation.No, just a curse that must and will be broken oh please let us our children free us.we sit imprisoned writing on these walls with placenta, hoping we can write our future with it.this life if lived through the curse is not thine life but of evils three eyes.we must strike the eyes to free ourselves just don't look into them for they turn us into stone.this is no history book we are writing here. this is our will.We do write this will in our blood to ensure that when we add on to it the greatest gift of many is soon released through our genes.From This Will Written In Blood we Release Freedom into our genes for success is no strander no more.