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Reviews/Critiques/Editing for fiction--esp. Romance/Love. All ratings & lengths accepted.
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Nov 2, 2011 at 9:53pm
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Review Please: Watcher Chapter 1
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I know it might be a bit slow right now (sorry) but I just want to get multiple opinions on what needs to be better about this chapter (the second one...well..will take a while to finish). I want to know if there are things that just need to be fixed. Thanks :)
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Review Please: Watcher Chapter 1 · 11-02-11 9:53pm
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