This is a great thing you're doing! I'd love for you to review chapter 1 and 2 of my teen sci-fi story. Short synopsis: When NASA' s plan to clean up space debris backfires, it sends sattelites hurtling towards the Earth to a small town in Colorado. A girl named Sami teams up with main character, Jonah White, to save their town. Sorry, probably the worst synopsis I've every written but I didn't want to leave you in the dark. To be honest, I'm not all that happy with Chapter 1 yet. It still needs a lot of work.
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