Interesting story. I can see it has become popular for a time. I have only one suggestion... Open the paragraphs so the chapters are easier to read. If I have time today, I will add on. I can see a man finding a giantess girl, maybe six years old, crying because she had fallen into a world of tiny people and wants to get home. Do you think the Witches can help her?
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