Super Powers, Transformations and Magic

Hey there.

I'm still sorta new to this group, but I'd like to share with you my interactive that I'm making called, The Magnetic Energizer.

It's badly explained coming from me, so I'll let the story do the talking. The link is here below:

http://www.writing.com/main/interact/item_id/1785022-The-Magnetic-Energizer

I have a few requests:
--Please no one add chapters
--I'm only looking for those who will read and review
--Also, if you're stumped about the characters, there's another link in the one above that will take you to the character biographies, which may sound confusing at first but I'll get to fixing it soon.

Hope you like it!