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Feb 7, 2012 at 5:50pm
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Re: Review: Pretty Boy Dead, Chap 41 by Jon M
Guess I've got some crafting to do; the suspect is very sick, so the injuries are secondary to his roaring fever; I guess I'll have to tone down Perelli a little; I'm trying to get across that Perelli was hell-bent on revenge for getting stuck with a dirty needle; this is modern day - but even in Atlanta, homophobia is huge, especially in the police department - there are always stories accordingly in the press - ha, not to mention the Eagle bar raid that happened a couple years ago that the city just settled with a huge payout - so, any insight/feedback you are giving and can provide is very helpful;

I'm nearing the end of the novel; I expect about six/seven chapter left - with a faster pace....glad I got you "hooked" and hope I can keep you until the end.


When are you going to post something new ? I keep seeing your releases via the Lyd Bi-Line (congratualtions very much!!!)



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