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Apr 9, 2012 at 12:31am
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review request for a short story
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Hey there,

Hope you could review this short story. It's under 2000 words long:


 The Track Meet - edited Open in new Window. (E)
State Track Championship
#1763265 by Wrath.of.Khan Author IconMail Icon


Disclosure (for what it's worth): This was originally the first chapter of a novel. I couldn't get going with the overall plot and didn't want to throw this chapter out (I thought it was decent lol) so I changed it into a short story and hope to submit for publication. The last 1/3 part (below the slashes - you'll see what I mean) is mostly what I added to make it a short story.

Hope you enjoy and, of course, many thanks in advance,

WoK
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review request for a short story · 04-09-12 12:31am
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