Actually Olivia's catching up, I read your story and really enjoyed it. Lots of background knowledge and the 'supporting actor' role was great - a really strong character. Lots of emotion too. It needs proofreading, but the story is great and I can't wait to read what you come up with in November!
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, I read your story and really enjoyed it. Lots of background knowledge and the 'supporting actor' role was great - a really strong character. Lots of emotion too. It needs proofreading, but the story is great and I can't wait to read what you come up with in November! 
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