From the sound of your story. I think it would be interesting to begin Matt's story, then do a chapter for each main character. After the chapter where Matt learns of the Grandmother no one wants to talk about, do a chapter about her. Go back and forth. The reader will already be interested to know what she has done for such a rift to between her and everyone else. Then again, you could start it off with Katherine, then jump off into Matt's story to draw the reader into finding out what happened to cause the problem.This is only my opinion. I'm sure whatever you choose will be awesome. I'm already interested in what happens.
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