Well I'm experimenting some with this one. I'm writing in the first person, but each chapter is a different person's point of view, so they all get the spotlight at some point and they all have their own set of problems to give their respective sections different flavors, even though for the most part they are experiencing the same events.
The way I see it, this could either be really fun, or a complete failure.
Priya Elena Alexander
"Immortal amaranth, a flower which once
In paradise, fast by the tree of life,
Began to bloom; but soon for man's offence
To heaven removed, where first it grew, there grows,
And flowers aloft, shading the fount of life"
- Milton, Paradise Lost
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