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Rated: E · Message Forum · Writing.Com · #1171455
Reviews/Critiques/Editing for fiction--esp. Romance/Love. All ratings & lengths accepted.
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Dec 2, 2012 at 9:22am
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Rip this chapter apart, please. ^_^
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I would love a review on this chapter of my novel The Mercenaries.
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Rip this chapter apart, please. ^_^ · 12-02-12 9:22am
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