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Dear Catherine Hall  This is a interesting story. Make even part murder mystery. So did the cop get disgraced or was it part of an undercover mission. (a statement not a question). What I see that could happen. (just my thoughts). The girl cop later finds this ex-boyfriend. He tells her the true. Well most of it. Just like him to keep something back for some reason or another. Her life start to be put in danger as they try to uncover some type of police coverup. (dirty cops). The girl cop and ex-boyfriend get back together (sort of). They fight and old issues comes up. He tells her more about what is going on, or she finds out. They later against all odds solve the mystery and they get marry. She later tills he she is expecting. He tells her that he is happy. Which is funny because that might of been why they broke up. He didn't want children because he was afraid to be a father. Ok. I might of gotten carry away, but it just came out that way. I hope you finish you book and it sells.  Joshua Penick ▼
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