Oh my, Michelle, you are amazing. Yes, Malik is the King off the Seelie Court. I like the idea of having Katrina know the secret and be able to do magical things, but then have to choose, and I like having it told through Lilia's eyes. I know we've seen the story of the hero's journey, but it seems fresh to have it done through the eyes of the mother watching and guiding.
I was so nervous to post this and ask for opinions, but I am so glad I did. Thank you!!
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