I think I have finally figured out how to fix my time problem in my book. I had where he did not talk to anyone for 3 years then he literally runs into a girl and all of a sudden he is talking to his friends and hanging out like nothing happened. I think I will have him still talk to a couple of people like his parents and best friend but not everyone at school and such. SO this week my goal is to re read to see if I can switch it around and still make sense and stay in the groove of my book.
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