I hope it's ok for me to post for help about a non-NaNo piece... :/ I have "Invalid Item" , and it's supposed to be related to the Iliad, in some ways or another. I'm trying to make it sound more war-like, and incorporate as many details as possible, to feel like the reader is suspended in time-to make a 4 minute dance battle seem like eternity. It's getting there, I think, but it really needs help, since it's due tomorrow.
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, and it's supposed to be related to the Iliad, in some ways or another. I'm trying to make it sound more war-like, and incorporate as many details as possible, to feel like the reader is suspended in time-to make a 4 minute dance battle seem like eternity. It's getting there, I think, but it really needs help, since it's due tomorrow. 
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